Comments of chapter undefined of Epic of Caterpillar

My god.. The fight scene.. So cringy.. The dialogue.. Are you 10 years old by chance? If yes, then sorry, this is a pretty good writing. If not, well, I think you can fix the dialogue and the flow of the battle, look for examples from other novels perhaps?

how big is she exactly anyway? like i'm imagining a regular-sized butterfly fighting a wolf and that's a very interesting image

One of the worst chapter in my novel reading career. Sorry author. I appreciate the hard work. But this chapter really ruined the story. Good luck with your future works. Bye bye

all the references: fate series, kumo desu ga nani ka, Re:monster, Tensei ****ara slime datta ken, black cover, Did i miss any

Wagyu is a good name if you don't know the meaning. god level and she become the woman of the god who bring him here x)

actually now that i think about it, how did they know her name? do all monsters just automatically know each others names? is it a telepathy like thing?

LOL, I just realized your profile pic is from "So I'm a Spider, So what?" Is that what inspired you to write this webnovel?

To bad it didn't gave away its "River Emperor" title to the slime for evolve to a true "Spirit Emperor Undine"... 😁

This is my first book I am reading and I can't wait to read more.

"they take our women" made me cringe so fucking hard. its a fucking wolf... also why is her luck -2? She is clearly very luckly... everything ends with her gaining more exp. Just have her have high luck instead of her surviving thanks to plot armor... also the fights... are so stupid. She comes up with stupid OP skills on the spot and they WORK, like really... just shout all the skills in a row to win the fight.

Doesnt the MC get double exp? Why does Rimiru get half of the exp she gets from her kills, yet she just gets half the EXP Rimiru gets from his kills? Honestly, with Rimiru getting the 4k exp, and everyone having equal or better stats at similar or lower pevels, it feels less and less like the MC is the MC.

I don't understand why is he making water weapons when pressurized water can be like a laser beam.

Hey! I see a lot of hate towards the novel and I really can't understand it.. while I admit the novel has faults, doesn't every novel? Is it possible they just don't like the story and act like it was written for them specifically? In any case, thank you so much for sharing your writing with everyone here. ~Shawl

this chapter felt like a million words...

Thanks for the chapter. ಠ‿ಠ

The protagonist is male or female, I will like more if are female

I Love this book. this author is a god amongst other writers . I bow before the LORD of LITERACY.

I’m the biggest bird 🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅

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A servant acting without waiting for it's masters orders? Impudent!