Comments of chapter undefined of Total War System

Bro I don’t get why a lot of characters like long ass hair for me it looks stupid and just death weight tbh especially in combat

So I am actually surprised. Your grammar isn't bad its just the basic rules of writing. "(Speaking).", '(Monologue).', Capitalizing first words, and [(System Speaking)] are easy fixes you should add. So its "", '', [].

Love the idea but it’s hard to read

yeah my spelling is bad haha I know i did say in the explnation haha

i think i started this before but when i did there were barely any chapters....tomahawk bouncing off the wall is pretty unique

my god, did you geaduated elementary because you don't even know that you have to capitalize the first letter in the first word of the sentence. You should also capitalized the I for you and your characters.

You use witch a lot

Are you a Macedonian?

that's cringy and i already tell it wwill go harem and boring.

witch?

hmm I like it

xp

Great 👍