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Comments of chapter undefined of Ascension or journey from world to world

LuciferDono
LuciferDonoLv2LuciferDono

does the author have something for Bellatrix Lestrange? I mean it's something new.

Inplay
InplayLv5Inplay

This story literally took everything we know about harry potter and threw it in the trash as if it were lies. I know this is a fanfic, but this is literally bizarre.

Licorice
LicoriceLv6Licorice

magic will disappear ?....rly?....

Zachariah_Browning
Zachariah_BrowningLv4Zachariah_Browning

He should collect magic beast and dragons and plants

Old_Scratch
Old_ScratchLv4Old_Scratch

Why would he need Bellatrix for her unmanage knowledge of magic when he literally has an A.I. that can seemingly gather previously unknown knowledge?

Zachariah_Browning
Zachariah_BrowningLv4Zachariah_Browning

He should move the castle into his world when he leave with his house elf’s

Inplay
InplayLv5Inplay

Did you make bellatrix a good lady?

GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv14GAMING_IS_MUST

he has the body of a dragon it should not be possible to harm him by any spells don't you agree???

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

Haise99
Haise99Lv6Haise99

Question ': why his name Ray Holiday? Should it be Ray Paverell? Did you obsessed with holiday, or coz you cannot think other name? 🤨🤨

glo_antttt
glo_anttttLv15glo_antttt

im envious of you peeps who actually are fans of harry potter simply because of the long chapters! not really into such a children's story! But great novel

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

o bellatrix...she is gone let her be recused and then live freely...

Hentaii_Yaroo
Hentaii_YarooLv4Hentaii_Yaroo

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Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4Supreme_Devil

First

PRiMoRiDiaL
PRiMoRiDiaLLv4PRiMoRiDiaL

I hope he aslo train his body unlike topical wizardsnonly rely on defence magic

HadesChampion
HadesChampionLv4HadesChampion

danm I'm rereading this and forgot how bad the grammar and the wrong terms , its like the words were Google translated a few times , I shall persevere because its still an enjoyable story

The_warrior
The_warriorLv14The_warrior

Xp

Dhaliwal2
Dhaliwal2Lv6Dhaliwal2

Bro, did you mistake the world of Harry Potter for modern day Xianxia where spiritual energy is thin?

Ninja_Baiano
Ninja_BaianoLv4Ninja_Baiano

Magic in harry potter is a strange mix of sorcerer,wizard and warlock. Needs wands and magic words, only get new spells fron books. Wandless magic is wildmagic. They dont run out of Magic, only at most get tired for a few moments sugesting that the channeling is mostly magic fron the nature and not body, meanwhile doing mafic in Magicless places is not harder. Magic is aparently very limited in its use based around discovery of new word of magic. Pair that with the odd mind Magic, and things make less sense even. Soo wizards in harrypotter are Wand sorcerer Warlocks.

Ik_wirana
Ik_wiranaLv10Ik_wirana

Great Sage is super computers!!! I want too