cier_Tempest
Frickin' amazing chapter Author, you just about made me cry tears of joy. You have not fallen into the trap prevalent in most LN and WN: the only actual "personable" character being the protagonist. I have come to the conclusion that to write a story that does not seem flat as paper one needs to, at least, create a basic personality and goal for EVERY character that speaks or who's act is explicitly mentioned! The goals may not be brought up, the personality may be obscure and not easily identified, but this will help create interactions and actions that seem real and lifelike. IRL every person's act either brings them closer to a goal/desire or expresses emotion/personality. Hence my belief that every character in a story meeds the basic parts. THANK YOU!!!
Wow, Sophia is a way smarter than I thought. It's truly a pleasant surprise. I'm eager to see how it will evolve. I'm happy to have a new chapter this close to the last one however the fact that it is the end of the volume probably means that there won't be a new chapter for a long time. *sigh* Thanks for your hard work. See you in the next volume.