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I mean, the guy has a couple of super rich friends. Would they not be willing to help?
agreed, reminds me of princess bride lol
just thought to clarify (no need to edit the story author) For US military there are generally two rank paths. the first (called enlisted) are the sergeants. Officers have had schooling to get their ranks (enlisted can go to officer training). Both can get to high ranking positions tho technically the lowest officer rank is higher up than the enlisted (technically because as a fresh officer you want to still respect sergeants cause they have knowledge and connections) In many cases jobs are held by both enlisted and officers, the difference being officers are generally given leadership roles. for example a developmental engineer in the USAF can start as 2nd lt. officer and eventually may become a general (or at least a Col.) Originally he may be doing Engineering, but later on his assignments will focus more on managment.
Is anyone "normal"? Or are the "normal" people those with sheep mentality, or better actors than the rest of us? Also regarding size there are averages which differ based on geographical location (mostly due to heritage ethnicity AKA genes)
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I dunno what the latest is, but hobbit may be a copywrighted/trademarked term. just a heads up that it may make author liable.
shoo fly
...I don't think the message is getting through
....sure you do.
believe "learning" in this paragraph should be earning. P.S. Author, if you are already aware of, or do not care/need these syntax and diction edits just let me know and I will stop bothering you.
Frickin' amazing chapter Author, you just about made me cry tears of joy. You have not fallen into the trap prevalent in most LN and WN: the only actual "personable" character being the protagonist. I have come to the conclusion that to write a story that does not seem flat as paper one needs to, at least, create a basic personality and goal for EVERY character that speaks or who's act is explicitly mentioned! The goals may not be brought up, the personality may be obscure and not easily identified, but this will help create interactions and actions that seem real and lifelike. IRL every person's act either brings them closer to a goal/desire or expresses emotion/personality. Hence my belief that every character in a story meeds the basic parts. THANK YOU!!!
Weird, it's almost as if all books are influenced by others.
oh...I'm just [insert any marvel or DC superhero...except for spiderman he really is just a friendly neighborhood spider] no biggie.
Dunno how exactly to fix the sentence...but just thought I'd mark it for you.