Comments of chapter undefined of The Oracle Paths

Writing these emotions without resorting to cliches or cringe is a real challenge for a good deal of authors even moreso for authors not focused on romance. I appreciate your effort Ark! 👌

assertive girl nextdoor personality √ relationship negotiation √ good internal dialogue √ fear of rejection √ burden of choice √

3x the work and 3x the appreciation. It didn't come across as sappy or lazy writing

It's good and not cringe!!!! We can fell your ankwardness and it's fine because that make it all the more realistic. Who wouldn't be ankward in such situation? I still wish a bit that Xi and Jake would be more honest with their feelings. They both know the truth, but keep being evasive about it. Makes it cute though, so I'm not complaining too much ^^

Thank you for the early chapters and great chapter by the way.. very fresh feeling, it gives me a fresh expectation of flirting between jake and lucia along the chapters.. cant wait for the next one

I think it was well written and suits Lucia’s character quite well

Good chapter

I do agree that emotional scenes carry a different kind of effort. But I like how this chapter turned out. It all made sense for the characters involved. Thanks for the great chapter

I was afraid of Jake take back himself and the romance of the novel get stop for other 500 chapters but i liked too much how it finish. Xi is clever whe she saw was loosing terrain she let down a bomb hahaha Keep the good work Ark

That was very well done Ark

Good Chapter

Beautiful chapter.

good chapter.

I have a question. In the previous chapters it was said that oracle prioritizes quality rather than quantity and that it brings more aether to their universe the more powerful people exist in it, so I am interested to what happens when a powerful individual becomes corrupt? does the universe lose aether supply?

A fun read. Thank you for the chapter

we can't unlock new chapters using pass?