Arkinslize
why does it feel like everyone on the side of jake are idiots? it doesn't matter if it's the 1st, 2nd or in this third ordeal, none of his allies did anything worthwhile ( only Tim with his luck did something good ). Until now the only one who is doing something is jake, and the others are just baggage. And then we have ruby team. if Jake's teammate were just as reliable as rubys, his score would probably be way higher.
I don't see the point of giving a sole chapter for a fight between NPCs who are basically non-existent after the ordeals. These nobodies are fighting... What am I supposed to feel? Also what's up with these names? It's already difficult that new characters suddenly appeared, but you also gave them names that no one would bother to remember.