Comments of chapter undefined of The Oracle Paths

I like the changes of point of view

As long as it is reasonable and not repetitive then changing POV is good for projecting a wholesome view of the world.

I like to have multiples points of view, it makes the situations more believable, and it's interesting to see when this perspectives collide with one another.

Can't wait for the mass release [img=update]. Just wondering if I'm the only one having this problem but is anyone else not receiving notifications for this novel when you definitely have them turned on?

I like both point of view

Personally,I would like to have a 9/1 ratio between jake and the secondary characters

9/1 or 8/2 jake to side char ratio will be good

Wooh fish genicide with a side of helping tim and seeing sarah. and to top it off we have mass release seasoning added to it a little later once it cools down

Change of POV is good, but don't make the side characters seem like MC, as is the case in Epic Fantasy novels. Also, please don't focus on a single side character for numerous chapters continuously, if possible. There was this novel that I read in which I had problems figuring out who the MC is, and I didn't like that one bit. That being said, the way you have been writing uptill now is excellent and please do keep on writing as such in the future. This novel is readily advancing in my personal top novel list and is now one of my favourites.

I like Jakes point of few more but it should still have some side character chapters like every 5 chapters with Jake make 1 for the side characters.

I want change pov for better ending

Wait, so Jake who is much taller,physically stronger, and stronger in aether cant catch up to Tim who is a teenager with stats probably a bit better than an average *****. Maybe Tim ,at best, is as at the level of a top class Olympian athlete but regardless Jake should be able to catch up very quickly. It's also weird that Jake hesitated to go and protect the kid, whose only real 'family' is Jake and his group. Maybe his bloodline is affecting his thoughts to make him more prone to being a predator which means he wants to hunt more than he wants to protect Tim. Or it could be that his bloodline species just train their young very harshly from a young age and thus at Tim's age , in Jake's mind, he should be able to protect himself. I wonder if we will ever get to see an overprotective Jake like a mother bear that rips apart any threat that gets within eyesight of her cubs. Maybe that will happen if his cousin gets hurt or Ruby or if he has his own kids.

I want to know sarahs POV.

i dont mind changing pov's. the way you are doing is good =D

as long as it's done with parsimony, it's cool, just don't forget that me and probably others are in this for jake.

Changes of viewpoint is required to make the story more diverse and entertaining. He needs people to move forward and to know this people we need their viewpoint.

I like the Cloud Atlas style and mass releases😊

I really like the pov of other characters. they all have great personalities and I'm rooting for all of them! the experience is much more rich and complement really well

I like multiple points of view, I feel like they add more depth to the story rather than just a linear this happened that happened