Arkinslize
Hey Ark, lately I feel like you are unnecessarily stretching out the descriptions or other unimportant details. I don't know if you'll take offense to this, but can you try to make your sentences more concise?
When I started reading this book, Ark said somewhere in the chapter or reviews that the begining is slow and it picks up afterwards.... which was true cause after they entered the new world the story picked up very nicely for me but after the completion of the 1st ordeal its slowing down. Plz do something about it. And Iam giving 6 Power Stones for the story which I think arent worth anymore if it goes on like this.