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Comments of chapter undefined of The Oracle Paths

MightyHeart
MightyHeartLv5MightyHeart

Hey Ark, lately I feel like you are unnecessarily stretching out the descriptions or other unimportant details. I don't know if you'll take offense to this, but can you try to make your sentences more concise?

sssswwe
sssswweLv4sssswwe

Hmm

DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14DaoOfCulture

2 portions? Ain't that quite a lot... Mc can probably make more money by auctioning the leftover portions

kishorebhathane
kishorebhathaneLv4kishorebhathane

When I started reading this book, Ark said somewhere in the chapter or reviews that the begining is slow and it picks up afterwards.... which was true cause after they entered the new world the story picked up very nicely for me but after the completion of the 1st ordeal its slowing down. Plz do something about it. And Iam giving 6 Power Stones for the story which I think arent worth anymore if it goes on like this.

Blas_de_lezo
Blas_de_lezoLv12Blas_de_lezo

i feel the author has a good mix of action and description/plot development.

myna_meis
myna_meisLv3myna_meis

merci pour le chapitre

AlexandraHeimdallr
AlexandraHeimdallrLv14AlexandraHeimdallr

thanks for the chapter. is the human city a floating island?

rockefelm
rockefelmLv11rockefelm

weee

shalkey_ankegumo
shalkey_ankegumoLv3shalkey_ankegumo

Thank you :;D

Organicact
OrganicactLv2Organicact

Don't let blood exceed 100ml or else go to gremlin

Jay_Crew10
Jay_Crew10Lv14Jay_Crew10

How much is two portions?

CamilleDirithyl
CamilleDirithylLv10CamilleDirithyl

Plus d'immersion afin de pouvoir visualiser le lieu dans lequel le mc de tient, ainsi que le contexte, permet de rentrer dans le récit, et ce n'est pas inutilement long, donc merci, ce format d'écriture semble vraiment top.

Prided
PridedLv14Prided

Exp

Wander
WanderLv14Wander

More pls

nitraM
nitraMLv4nitraM

first...