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Comments of chapter undefined of Is that a Wisp?

Rami100
Rami100Lv5Rami100

I love the world-building of this novel, because everything relates to the most vital, interests. No "I'll destroy your whole family for wanting to kidnap me," etc.

Jackalope
JackalopeLv12Jackalope

Loved the greedy chicks move. Made me giggle. Also liked the peaceful resolution so far. Nice not to see everyone murder happy.

RandomPotatoe
RandomPotatoeLv11RandomPotatoe

It's so nice having a protagonist that doesn't sweat the small stuff in this kind of novel. Usually a protagonist would demand the execution of the entire clan for such a slight instead of just taking the money and getting support.

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Scyth
ScythLv5Scyth

Nice chapter as always

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The_Dream12311
The_Dream12311Lv13The_Dream12311

The MC is still too nice, this might bite him in the ass in the future.

Speedster
SpeedsterLv11Speedster

pls noone spoil if I am right but I just realized that since mc is a wisp and like really in touch with his soul wouldn't he be really good at bringing people back from the dead or instantly kill someone by either forcing out or bringing back in their soul into their body?

Apri_7531
Apri_7531Lv4Apri_7531

Yup not so cliche :v

Damien_john
Damien_johnLv13Damien_john

love it keep it up

Kelvu
KelvuLv13Kelvu

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Chair
ChairLv10Chair

Does the grammar get any better? Its really jarring to have present tense verbs in 3rd person narration, and then past tense in others.

ayayaya
ayayayaLv15ayayaya

an mc that doesn't mindlessly kill everyone and makes the world's his enemy. good god.

Mlongue
MlongueLv6Mlongue

A wild mc appear with a simple solution must don't care about. Quite a good ending without unnecessary bloodshed. But there should be a way to cancel a Blood contract bindings, since everything have a counter and there must have been people wishing to destroy those bindings.

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kabrok_br
kabrok_brLv14kabrok_br

Thx for chapter.

Daoist_Rubeno
Daoist_RubenoLv11Daoist_Rubeno

Why is MC not harvesting dantians of humans? He can absorb them and save money. It's hypocritical that he kills innocent beasts for demon cores but beasts can't absorb human dantians. Or at least mc isn't doing it despite that he was hunted like a monster and not seen as sapient by humans.

Kelvu
KelvuLv13Kelvu

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Lithoor_Bayushi
Lithoor_BayushiLv4Lithoor_Bayushi

When the offer of low quality rank 3 spirit stones is given, it says "this offer should be looked down on." Shouldn't it be "This offer should not be..."?

Agilapen
AgilapenLv13Agilapen

so they wanted to kidnap him and force a contract and killing all witnesses? wouldn't the mercenary office won't know if they found where krune staying? another idiot author

Niloysom_Das
Niloysom_DasLv5Niloysom_Das

Good!

Gee_Meed
Gee_MeedLv4Gee_Meed

okay next

Evelyn_Wiles
Evelyn_WilesLv15Evelyn_Wiles

Wording is everything. Some evildoers are only too happy to slide a monkey wrench into the works using loopholes. One way, they have to do no harm and provide support... forever. Another way, they only have to do no harm, until they leave the city. A third option restricts all of that to only the timeframes that they are in the city... forever. Get your wording straight or it could be your undoing.