Comments of chapter undefined of Journey To Become A True God

Where are your grammar corrections author? I’ll leave a review if u fix the he/she errors

I don't know about anyone else but until the he/she errors get fixed I'm not leaving any power stones the story is good but the writing quality is low😔

Nice work author, idc about the he/she mistake cuz I understand them lol

Sigh now I'm getting used with this grammar kinda gonna fix up by my self

timing isn't right but on the first day you meet her you ask her out and are already touching her breast.

Innocent creator first??????

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Dude I commend your story, it's interesting to but the English is something else pls go get an English tutor

Thanks for the chapter

Thx for the chap

A good story, just work on correct He, him, her, she

"Creator first" and MC said "Rest in Peace"....... That was a Fast Kill!!

Thx

thanks

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