Comments of chapter undefined of My Magical System

........... you know... i was kind of looking forward to reading this based off the synopsis.... but come on man..... we don't ask for a genius main character.. just don't give us someone so stupid that we lose all hope... it's almost like you sacrificed his IQ to generate some forced comedy which failed miserably. dropped.

So mc does 0 damage with his primary system assigned weapon but does 20% with some random discarded weapon

Opinion based Mistakes: 1) The MC called himself/changed his name to Zombie. 2) The MC (temporarily) walked so close to the edge of life and death that he became an Edgelord, seriously! Red eyes & Black hair, cool my a**. 3) If you were going to make him "cool" then at least give him a cool name, unless you add a Rob to that name it isn't going to be better.

Naming someone zombie just shows how low IQ you have

I hate MC that claim to be experts from reading alot then do the dumbest 💩 possible!!!

low iQ MC doing stupid choices right off the bat. okay he just died but he seems to be clear-headed. random choice... and that name... anyway, let's see how it turns out

Thank you for the honest reviews. I'm working on my writing grammar as of now. The next chapter would be clearer to read.

Im so confused why this guy is literally brain dead stupid asf 😂😂😂😂

what an idiot

Why mc so dumb

story is relatable but the writing is sloppy

noob 😂

for someone who killed others hes squishy. Still guess ill see how it goes

ok clueless of what's going on that a good thing right now

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Well the name zombie... Fits his iQ level so I don’t see a problem so far if his stupidity can be fixed <—I’ve seen quite a lot of authors who have failed on that part but I’m sure since the review of this story is good it should be fixed in the next chapters (or else who would bother reading braindead mc??? Unless that’s your taste...)

I'm liking it so far.

Thanks

Kind of weird because the protagonist is talking while he fights so he has no way of knowing the time and it's also difficult to understand the movements in the fight