Comments of chapter undefined of Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

why does he have the same name in his second and third life (and possibly his first)... please tell me there is a plot reason for this...

the tenses. please God use consistent tenses. it's so jarring to read constantly changing tenses

dearest author, you need to keep in mind to keep the narration of the story and scenes in the past tense and character speech in present tense. You've been swapping the two constantly throughout the story thus far.

so far it's good. it resembles another novel but that's ok. I hope the plot get more interesting

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Thank you for this chapter

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This plot turn with poison is bad and artificial

thanks for the chapter

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Why did he suddenly want to attack the bandit camp, story is all over the place

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