I don't know about later chapter yet, but the author seems to forgot using question symbol (?) for many sentences. This little symbol add flavor and intonation to a story. Almost unbearable for me.
I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived.
Henry David Thoreau
These chapters have several parts that repeat the same thing several times without getting to the point. I don't think I can read further. The idea of this story is great.