Comments of chapter undefined of The Fourth Mistress
The Fourth Mistress
ash_knight17
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Honestly, my heart feels heavy after reading this final chapter.😢😥 I am not expecting Graham to die as well. OMG! I am crying while typing this comment.😭😭😭😭
What a tragedy!! 🥺😭 I didn’t expect Graham to die, but it is somehow understandable. He had a hand in Emily’s death, and that just seemed really wrong as well. If he’s alive, Louise will be torn to do the right thing (tell the police) about what really happened, or keep it a secret for Graham. With Graham’s death, so does the mystery of the manor. It’s just so tragic… Thanks for the roller coaster of emotions Ash! You did a job well done here! Looking forward to read more of this genre from you. 🖤🖤🖤
I am at loss.... It was soooo sad 😭😭😭😭 but at the back of my mind it is a befitting end. Maybe because if he live Emily will not stop even if her skeleton is being burn. But still my heart aches...Louise suffer so much... What will happen next....have to wait patiently even if it is hard... You really have to expect the unexpected... Thank you author for the roller-coaster ride and I will await what will happen in Volume II..
I feel so much pain for Louise and I feel her loss 😭😭😭 I am so heartbroken with this; but then maybe this is for the best. With that ending, it seems realistic in the sense that if nothing stops Emily and with Graham still around, her ghost would continue to wreck havoc and madness on them. So Graham will be united with Lisa here, leaving Louise behind, 💔 Now it's the TRUE FOURTH MISTRESS left behind as a widow. What happens now with Louise, and with Gilbert, Camella and Harvey? and what about the remains of the REED'S manor and properties? We'll await what you have in store for this in Vol. II, dear Ash. 🤗😘💖 So we wait until Oct. 31.....
I think this was a great ending for a few reasons. First being that Graham had a part in Emily’s death that I believe will not sit well with Louise. Second, Graham was in love with Lisa and it is only fitting that they end up with each other in the afterworld. Third, I didnt really see any chemistry between Graham and Louise, refer to reason 2. Hehe With that said, I cannot wait for Louise’s next adventure and love interest!
I feel so sad...and I guess Graham and Lisa were ment to be.. he even went to her at the end. Maybe this is start of Louise's detective 🕵️♀️ career, specializing in ghost. And explain her finances. Her and Graham seem to only have good friendship.. never really went farther than that. Guess it would be odd if they stayed together even after he still seemed sad over Lisa's stuff, including having her items still in house, even keeping her wedding dress hidden from everyone. I am sad tho...bc Louise felt like she couldn't save anyone and lost more ppl she said were family. And potential was there for her to save everyone. oh I'm sad...and sadder have to wait so long to see what her future holds 😢
This is a beautiful story. It is fictional reality, sorta paranormal supernatural book. There is no high fantasy here like a sorcerer or witch or grims to bring people back from the dead like other ash's work of LDG or TCO worlds. This chapter takes the path ending is completely right. There shouldn't change anything where the story leads because once the characters written whose in or out, that is it. They are gone and done. The plot from the first chapter until now makes sense to read but bringing back the MC who is important in the story can't always have a happy ending, not all stories have happily ever after. Even though some or maybe most of the readers don't like how it ends, at least the character is specially memorable to make this story itself unique. Evil always win and it pains the protagonist who thinks the battle is finally over when they realize, it is not, until they figured their loved ones or who they work with dies turns out to grief, empty, loss, anger, or depressed. But in the story, those pain will make the character learned to be strong and better. Bad things around a person or their family always happen. It's true in reality and this fiction novel can be sort relatable. Louise lost everyone who is in the Reeds family especially Graham, the husband who did his best to give love and respect. Each characters development is fantastically good, suspicious, and different of who they are when we didn't expect who they be. Now the officers pointing at Louise gives her a hard time, thinking it's time how will she get out of it, clearing her name. Not many people don't believe in ghost and supernatural things, a difficult case to persuade. As of now, Louise is in pain. I cried for her. For Graham, his family. As long Graham loves Louise, I am happy. As long Graham finally meets his family and meet Lisa again, I am happy with that. He is in peace. This book gives so many feelings. I hope this chapter stays like this, no black magic or so forth. Ash, you doing amazingly great. Diamond book. 💎📖 Don't overwhelm yourself. If others can't accept this how this chapter ending ends, so be it. There are many books have happy endings out there they can read. Personally prefer to stick this chapter, write something that comes in your mind and comforts you how you want the story ends. Thank you for writing TFM. You did your hard work, what else could we ask for? You'd pour your blood, sweats, tears, heart, mind and soul with time since before Louise originally title The Girl in the Casket hiatus, you brought this novel justice. Well done the work. All right. I'll go cry some more.
Never in my 1000s of dreams or thoughts it appeared that it would end this way by breaking...... no...... shattering my heart into a million pieces. He is a brute to leave Louise all alone, who fought to bring out the truth and protect him as well as his family, even though she failed miserably. However, He looked exceptionally handsome with the morning sunrays falling over the side profile of his face with disheveled hair which emitted a yellowish brown tinge, his smile was as warm as the sun rays which fell on his face.smiling
