why is she blushing ,she's way too old ,annd it's just changing cloths and holding hands ,just imagine an old woman holding a 9 years old kid's hand while blushing (gross)
I really like that the first person is an assassin. I mean that's just my preference but still cool. The story is a bit fast paced but I think it has good potential so good work, cant wait to see where it goes.
OK, so the setting of the story is 300 years in the future. At this point, VR should be already far advanced so it's a bit weird the mc is making browser games. VR is already starting to be incredibly beautiful.