Comments of chapter undefined of Primordial System

??? I'm not gonna say a blind person can't become the best doctor in the world, but I feel they'd need a tremendous amount of drive and never become a neet. Of course it's fiction, but it's still a shaky start.

This plot confuses me

I'd suggest taking the blind thing out and replacing it with another disability if you really want to have one. If you yourself have never experienced being blind or done much research on it it isn't really believable, especially when it is this lazily done. I would suggest replacing it with her being deaf/paralyzed or some form of mental condition. Additionally, her being lesbian because she was raped, while I'm sure it has happened in the real world at least once, may sit badly with some people. Maybe make it part of the reason she likes girls, or just make her afraid of men due to the experience, that would give her a large character flaw that would make sense and could be worked on throughout the story. :)

Damn! And here I thought other novels were bad... This one takes the cake.

Only the prologue and already plotholes galore.

That grammar is quite bad.

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Uhmm bruh.. No jst no outta all the wayz ta have her die ya had ta have one thtz like totally impossible ta believe.. Dafuq kinda faulty shyty af headphonez she be usin.. Now bein legally blind and becomin a dr ight thtz possible but the way she died i aint gunna believe it lolz

Yeah, one chapter in and this is horrible. Dropping it already.

This is the most unique start I've ever read and I'm not sure how I feel about it

feels all random

Merci pour ce chapitre ^^

How can a blind dude be a surgeon? Weak start

Is this novel for lesbian???? Is this just girls?? I am straight so I don’t really like it

как врач она , наверно, лечила наложением рук, романы она не читала а слушала, но КАК она умерла от разряда в 4 батарейки АА???

When i started this i wasn’t expecting the orphan to have a success story