Marielle14
Is it just me who feels that this is a wasted chapter???? Yes I know it's a flashback from few minutes ago but everything was already described/narrated in previous chapter... 🙄 Sighhhh...this is what I mean Author..your story is good just that it is too repetitive and long-winded, too much description...for example it takes 3-4 chapters to present half a day's movement for the main characters and we are talking about the SAME characters, not other characters in the same time frame... I don't know if you understand what I'm trying to say but it's very frustrating reading "empty" chapters and by this I mean Author has already beautifully described previous chapter but repeated the same from another character's POV in next chapter - we can already feel BOTH character's feelings previous chapter, no need to further embellish 🙄