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armstrca3mthCommentedCome on (not common)
"Common. It's lunch. Let's use this chance. Let's eat with Gu Zhen. I know you have many tricks left right?"- armstrca5mthCommentedCh 131 Forbidden Desire
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I believe the share will be SAFER in his hands (not saver)
"I believe that the share will be saver in his hand rather than mine." Yu Yan didn't mind in the slightest bit about the profit. She believed that she could surely earn her own money regardless whether the mine's right was still in her hand or not. - armstrca11mthCommented
Ingredients not engredients
Eve was humming as she walked towards her room. They have yet to finalize the engredients that could replace the glyphs that a sorcerer can use. However, she asked to go back to her room where she was supposed to spend her time for two weeks to check on her maids. - armstrca1yrCommented
Walking not willing like a toad
She was once again amazed at how her sister was walking proficiently while she was willing like a toad. - armstrca1yrCommented
Countess (not countless)
"Instead of being concerned about the Count's health, it seems that the Countess is more concern about something that has yet to happen." Finally, the Duke intervened. "Perhaps, the Countless really wants the Count to die so that you can get his wealth?" - armstrca1yrCommented
To regret messing with me ( remove the up after messing)
"You wanted to play with fire, don't you? Just wait and see, you are going to regret messing up with me," Xia Sha snorted. - armstrca1yrCommented
What a wonderful LIFE I have
"Other parents will at least let their children learn from their mistakes, mine don't even care what I think. They just want to leech off me and use me for their personal gain. What a wonderful like I have." Qian Meng smirked, not a hint of amusement on her lips. Her eyes filled with loathing as she looked at the man she called her father. - armstrca1yrCommented
Remove the word ‘take’ Be sure to open them all (is how it should be written)
Mrs. Yu, " No, It's nothing I just want to remind you. I put all your presents in the next room, be sure to take open them all ." - armstrca1yrCommented
That I couldn’t save him (not safe)
"Lost my parents and the only person I loved the most, my little brother. It hurts me and tortures me everyday, that I couldn't safe him." His hand came to both sides of his mask as he dropped his head in sadness, when he spoke once again, his voice was broken. "I can't," he gritted, like he was right in that memory again. - armstrca1yrCommented
Too funny! The maids are not wearing her boots. It should be… As the maids struggled to get her boots on her feet.
It was barely an hour to dawn and it was basically the same amount of sleep she had gotten all night. She yawned as the maids struggled to wear her boots. The idea that she would have to endure traveling for that long didn't sit right with her. Vampires had it easy. - armstrca1yrCommented
Invisible, not invincible
He remained invincible throughout the journey to the restaurant. - armstrca1yrCommented
OMG! Horrible - this sentence makes no sense at all. If you lose, then we get to kiss you. If we lose then you can choose to kiss us. Isn’ that simple?t
He looked at Xie Ming and asked, " Hey girl. Do you wanna play rock paper scissors with us. If you lost then we I will kiss you and if I lost you can kiss me. Isn't it simple." he asked checking her out from head to toe. - armstrca1yrCommented
Disappeared not dissipated
Both Xie Ming and Mother Jin kept chatting for long. The man in the room dissipated after a while to give them some privacy. - armstrca1yrCommented
He doted on her, this granddaughter… Not DOTTED (that means to put dots all over)
She remembers, his grandfather is the patriarch of the Jin family. As the patriarch his aura is very dangerous but it is very different to his family. And he especially favors Ming, as she was his choice. Ming was the granddaughter of his best friend, Li Qiang. He dotted on her this granddaughter of him so much. Before dying, he asked Liwei's grandfather to get Ming and Liwei get married as his last wish. Before dying, he just wanted to make sure that her granddaughter will live happily even if he was not there. Because after his daughter's death, her husband 'Xie Rong' brought his Mistress 'Rou Xi' and his daughter 'Xie Xinyi' home, which is of same age as Xie Ming. He cheated his daughter and also took the properties on her name. And after bringing his Mistress home, Ming 's life became hell in that house. So he brought her to his house and before dying he fixed her marriage with Liwei. - armstrca1yrCommented
Omit the word up. I was screwed by my bosses
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The story of 2 people who meet, make up names, types of employment, start to fall in love, then separate without each other’s Contact information. They meet again, shortly afterwards, in their real jobs & names. He’s a prince, she’s a military Officer. They have both loved and lost, it’s Their 2nd chance. And let the reading begin.
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For the fuss, not fuse A fuse is in an electrical box or it can the the thingy you light on dynamite (in cartoons)
"For allowing me to sleep on your couch this month. And, I also apologize for the fuse during the housing redecorating this morning. I would like to ask your permission first but after I checked your room, you were still in your deep slumber so…" - armstrca2yrReplied to armstrca
Maybe you mean - coronary artery?
Cristan woke up lazily with sleepy eyes. Last night, he came home at dawn because his help was needed by Professor Antonio. He had to check the reports from the professor's students and there were plenty of them. Moreover, the professor also had a health problem in his coroner and a ring has been put inside his heart to smooth his blood circulation. After her surgery, he is not allowed to be too tired of his work. - armstrca2yrCommented
A coroner is a person who cuts up dead bodies to find out what killed them
Cristan woke up lazily with sleepy eyes. Last night, he came home at dawn because his help was needed by Professor Antonio. He had to check the reports from the professor's students and there were plenty of them. Moreover, the professor also had a health problem in his coroner and a ring has been put inside his heart to smooth his blood circulation. After her surgery, he is not allowed to be too tired of his work.