Comments of chapter undefined of The Slime Farmer

My head hurts reading this. Like reading a novel fresh from mtl without edit whatsoever.

All good but character naming..ahhhhh

This type of language is the one I needed, Argh! My English nerves are ripping apart to get stronger! I also hope this story isn't gory, I'm tired of blood everywhere.

Slavery is the greatest stain on humankind. And yet a culture where their leaders are warrior priests who debate the finer lines between what is good and the greater good should never allow this to happen.

These first 3 chapters have been awful to read, not in terms of language but the overall narrative and introduction of characters. I also don't like the immediate usage of philosophy when we haven't been introduced to anything within this world yet. All we know are a few characters and some circumstances surrounding the mc, with basically no knowledge of the world or society he is living in.

I enjoy your diction and character interactions. They feel varied, complex, and interesting. I appreciate your effort.

Thanks for the novel

I want to know if he brought the gold from his sister (and brother?). Either she sent it because she wishes him well, so bring it, or she did it to insult him, so bring it to spite her. Ditto for the brother.

I have read the comments here, and all I can think is that people here are too used to reading web novels where everything is fully laid out in (far too complete) detail. There is no need to infer anything. Traditional novels don't spoon feed you, they give you context and get on with the storyline. These chapters shows you a look at the MC, his situation and character and shows the society he lives in, without explaining everything, but paints a picture that is clear enough.

its a bit too long at the start but I like it so far

Thanks

Thanks

This story is painful to read.... sorry its not for me

loving this novel so far

The language/speech is too difficult/hard to read. Very different from regular english. Kind of like very old language

The father is a douche. And he'll get what's coming to him later on

ok wtf i mean there was a hint of magic theme there before but then like nothin but pure confusion and then portal to another world

Great stuff

please try to manage your writing language its messy