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Kyle_Smith_12443yrReplied to MrBlueSkyThe story isn't hard to understand because of the level of English utilized, it is difficult to understand because it makes no sense, especially the use of philosophy just getting off handedly tossed in here because reasons. There are too many elements so far that have no context to justify what's going on, it reads like the middle to the end of a high fantasy book, but this is literally the first 3 chapters.
Ch 3 Desislaf Rimet (3 of 3)- Kyle_Smith_12443yrCommented
These first 3 chapters have been awful to read, not in terms of language but the overall narrative and introduction of characters. I also don't like the immediate usage of philosophy when we haven't been introduced to anything within this world yet. All we know are a few characters and some circumstances surrounding the mc, with basically no knowledge of the world or society he is living in.
Ch 3 Desislaf Rimet (3 of 3) - Kyle_Smith_12443yrReplied to pwaters017
If we are talking about desert, sur eit is usually ridiculously hot during the day and most nights, but it's not as if it's never freezing in a desert, although it may be rare.
After the temperature lowered, the sand monster seemed unwilling to move. When the temperature reached zero Celsius the movement of the sand monster became significantly more sluggish. - Kyle_Smith_12443yrCommented
It's supposed to be including you there are 10. The next chapter clarifies that it is 10 people.
"H..Hi! I'm Alex." Alex awkwardly replied. Seeing Alex's reaction, Emerald laughed and put his hands around Alex's shoulder, "Come, you are the last person. Including you, there are 10 more." Alex nodded as he listened to Emerald. - Kyle_Smith_12443yrCommented
I'm guessing that is supposed to be fairy?
That was a pet of the wind family. The pet had wings like an elf and looked like a human being. Its dark and glowing eyes took up half of its face. The upper half of the pet's body resembled that of a female human being with breasts covered up in flower petals, quite enticing. - Kyle_Smith_12443yrReplied to Jonathon_Hanline
It can't be instinct, if it were instinct they never would have jumped in the first place. Intelligence insinuates that the others learned from the previous failures of others in the group.
It seemed, they had at least some instincts. - Kyle_Smith_12443yrCommented
Should be intelligence not instinct.
It seemed, they had at least some instincts. - Kyle_Smith_12443yrCommented
I thought this said Leo vs Stifler đ
Leo Vs Silver - Kyle_Smith_12443yrReplied to _Kaitlin_
If you are going off of legend, it was because old mirrors used silver, but now they don't. So technically vampires should have a reflection in the modern Era.
The two of them went looking around until they had come across a toilet. Inside was a mirror for Quinn to look at himself. The changes weren't so drastic that you couldn't tell it was Quinn, but it looked like he had just gone on a 12-week model training course. - Kyle_Smith_12443yrCommented
But this thing lives in the desert, how could low temperature be an issue for it
After the temperature lowered, the sand monster seemed unwilling to move. When the temperature reached zero Celsius the movement of the sand monster became significantly more sluggish.