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Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Demon God

Rylee_Bercier
Rylee_BercierLv13Rylee_Bercier

I still think it's sus that xun is even thinking about killing long chen for long shen in the first place

Enzonator
EnzonatorLv14Enzonator

I like where this is going. Long Shen seems to be trapped within the mirror inside the temple. Xun seems to care more and him than Long Chen which intrigues me, but I'm sure Long Chen will find a way around this as he's the main protagonist at play. Plus he has room for more wifes. I'm still curious about Long Chen's War Spirit ability as it's most likely going to reside in Long Chens after the trial since he's most likely keeping his spiritual bloodline as well. I hope the Spirit Warrior that sealed the town won't lead us astray from the main path of the story and is something we can just get it over with a chapter or two. There's a lot of rewording that can happen in these sentences to make the reading be soother. You can combine some of them for example: "Lifting the old lady by her neck, Long Chen brought her to the slaughter room." small changes like that can help [img=recommend]

ThePizzaGuy1
ThePizzaGuy1Lv4ThePizzaGuy1

Okay. As I see, xun doesn't care about long Chen.. After all this time, I'm really sad to see this happening... Xun you upset me girl.. Author you wrote so many mystery in this novel. Maybe that excites us but I still think long chen should take precautions from now on. Although I'm liking him in this arc as he is hiding things from xun. Nice, if it ends if her betraying him, I don't if I had to drop this novel, but I hope it will not be the hard way. You did write good things

Alagu2Muthu
Alagu2MuthuLv5Alagu2Muthu

xp

Pedro_Yeshua
Pedro_YeshuaLv2Pedro_Yeshua

Yummy humans brains