The story is probably ending. But I don't like the idea of separation. Bcs the bracelet.. It couldn't be on with ryder. So why?

Just two sick immortal in the end.. Come on.. All this for that!?

Mate, I was talking about the girls at least we had in our previous novel. .I'm not sure about other worlds, but the home world should include them and about other worlds I think. Marvel had too. Much girls and the rest was fine.

Well we can think the author don't want it.. You know he was already against the idea . But anyway we can wait and see what happens but I literally think if this goes the usual her being punished than nothing to say more.

Yo.. Fan.. Your loyal supporter here. To be fair I don't care much about how nik develop feelings or things.. I already told that previous world was but too fast. And this world seems just fine. But I do wish that you don't leave the original girls out of it and I would rather like some more romance rather than boredom.. DEPENDS on you as you always do good. Hope you will not change it this time around.

A good novel with a bad ending maybe. How sad it will be . All this for love u can give but you don't want to.. Alas..

To be truth ,the author never heard what we said. From the first to last he just made her bad.. Nothing else.. Now he is making her more bad..

The story is seems much more better this time.. I just hope u don't leave the girls out

To.. Fan.. It's pizza.. I'm not sure about your intentions with the rewrite. But pls don't leave the original girls out of the way.. If you want to reduce some girls from marvel saga that's fine.. But these one, not really. Help out this poor guy here😢

It's fine mate. U write very well.. I just like nik a lot. So after a long time it's take bit of time for me to adjust. .keep it going.. 😊

I'm so fond of nik with ready wit that I really can't seem to like this guy now 🥺! ! Why fan why... U make him like this. .we need action...

Okey.. The pizza guy here.. Fan I think its good as usual.. But I think its slow compared to GCEHIG..🙄 MATE I WANT HIM IN ACTION Xd

From the start when you started writing it to now, To be honest I like it anyway.. But I also think rewriting maybe able to make it better.. But I will go with you. Whatever you wish rather than dropping it.. Cause it has emotional attachment now.. But if you do choose to rewrite it, I will suggest you to give nik more time in his home world.which I missed constantly... So for me to say anything about it, I will say the story is yours, I enjoyed it, so I will honor your choice...

Yo. .I'm back. .just to tell you that even before reading any part of it I know fan will write it like a beast as he always does. Haha. .He is that good.. Don't let me down mate. . Now I will get back to reading.. See ya

This one was decent

Someone pls notify me when this shun guy is out😑😑😑😑I can't really take him..

Bruh moment . I'm really sick of this guy.. In my sense all the creatures are hunting this guy. Why is he showing that he is weak when he is strong.. Anyway If he turn out to be the guy those dredlings came for and for him some kids died, then I'm against this guy. His first impression is already gone. So if you want to make him a friend of mc then probably this one is not for me.. So 😔 sad

Isn't it all mommy?

Well, it's fine. So, the trip from his home world this time divided into two parts .For keeping track it's good.

So he can fight a peak nascent soul cultivator with his lvl now?