Comments of chapter undefined of Naked Sword Art

The starting plot really great, the mc not someone with reincarnation situation.

Being blind doesn’t mean you can’t see and having sight doesn’t mean you can see.....or something like that

After the second chapter, the claws have dug in and taken hold, eternally smitten and irrevocably captivated. Keep up the great writing. Excited to real more and more.

This feels like high level character building. The story building and plot development is definitely on another level. The imagery is clean and clear you could definitely get this made into a show or anime. Loving the story. Although I’m not fond of ecchi stuff, this has amazing storytelling.

That's actually pretty interesting

so I take it that the serum didn't work and he's still blind

its hard t o know which sword they talking about

Your eyes won't do you much good, as the more you see with your senses, the MC should have naturally developed a sense of spatial positioning. - It would have been more logical / organic, that the MC regained his sight in the solid body or divine body realm, when advancing to one of these body realms, one could have the effect of rebuilding, rebuilding the body completely to make it perfect for battle, making the MC naturally regain his sight. - Also, if the MC advances more its spiritual cultivation, it will develop a spiritual sense, which is better than sight. -Yes, that was totally unnecessary, it would have been better if the MC recovered his sight naturally through cultivation.

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the story has me binge reading 📚 well done

too exaggerated, it does not suit his character, he raised a genius since he was a child and he will only kill him because he does not want to go out, it is something stupid, the most logical punishment would have been that if he refused, he would seal his cultivation base, making the disciples from the sect that hate him can beat him up, so the mc would have to leave if he did not want to continue receiving punishment, he would be making the mc leave the sect forcibly because the disciples of the sect beat him for having his cultivation sealed until that he does not leave the sect. -PSDT: author, when you write a character, you must understand how he thinks so that his actions and decisions are logical and make sense.

wow so they did not know the effects that elixir will have and his parents just gave it to him? o.O what if he died? sigh

Poor papa got unjustly bad rep. xD Man was super strict to his son but just wanted his m to become powerful and overcome blindness.

Thanks for the chapter.

Keep up the good work please don't give up on it!🙏

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nice haha

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