Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
HolyJoker
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after 2 times of throwing the stone he is only 80M up? How weak is MCs throw? Also i don't get why he just doesn't teleport to the furthest mountain/land he can see, but then again i don't know his teleport limit. But this whole raikage surprise attack seemed like forced plot :(, needed to humble mc i guess. Hard to believe MC was so easily taken by surprise.
You need to be consistent. By your story logic after this EVERYONE should know that he stole and transplanted the sharingans. He should be declared nukenin and hunted by all the ninja villages. Or what? You're going to pull another stupid plot armor to fix the story. Like I said, it's bad writing all around.
