Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

i dont know if this is a hole in the story but the bingo book stated he's a scheming and manipulative and the hokage might notice it and be more guarded against him and he's still a child

If there is a big contribution to the development of the clan and his personal strength is greater such a turn could pass. But here I see that the author is simply helping his hero in the most unsightly and implausible way.

Tsume would make a good concubine. A Inuzuka clan head needs atleast one inuzuka wife for bloodline purity.

By the way, are all of the Jashin cult still alive?

I was still reading because this is well written but... I just can't continue this story anymore. I absolutly hate your MC. He is everything I dislike : a traitor, a coward, a selfish prick, a psycho. He has no moral and is just rotten to the core. I was waiting to see him bye himself a consciousness to become a more "acceptable" antihero but no. I understand it will never happen and he will continue in his traitorous ways. This is just too much for him. Normally, I love antagonists but not the type who have no nobless of heart or inner moral.

the story has a good idea but is going way too dark too fast without any reason for it the guy was likely a sociopath in his previous life for acting like that... it like he feel ppl aren't human but him i just can't read that anymore. And i still don't think it is a bad story it is just not my taste

8yrs old? Yeah sure why not, bull some more. And in a quest to make your mc more edgy you have made him needlessly evil. What now? He's an evil psychopath just for the sake of it? What a retarded story.

Shit I'm loving this novel 👍👍

Tsume daughter also hot yaknow (ToT)

Exp

Honestly the mc seems a bit fake. He claims not to care about anything and be ruthless but the more it is mentioned the less impact it has. Stop saying stuff like "Not like I care" it just sounds childish considering he could just show with actions that he is willing to do anything to accomplish his goals. He doesn't really give off a cruel or cold blooded vibe to me.

if danzo and the hokage didn't notice the scheming part of it then they should just kill themselves.

Main character reincarnated what makes him think he took over someone else's body???

Make him the jinchuriki

Thank you for this chapter.

im just hoping he wont get the uchiha/senju or any other bloodline and that he just use something new.

Mann... How can someone good then reincarnate become evil

nice.

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️