Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon: Animus

It's a cringy mess with completely over-the-top and childish character behavior that constantly break any sort of immersion. No character in the story has even come close to actual human behavior so far, and that never bodes well for a story. Narration and descriptions are weak, but not as bad as the characters, and the plot seems to steer heavily into over-the-top unfunny comedy and coincidences. It's just not good. I don't know if you've improved since you started writing this story, but if you take a look at these chapters now, can you really, honestly say that you think this is worth reading? I'm not surprised it has a bunch of views in a place like webnovel though, but that does not indicate any sort of quality. I apologize if this comes as a surprise, though I'm guessing you'll dismiss it as 'trolling' or whatever, as is often the case. Either way, it doesn't seem like it'll be worth reading any further, so good luck with your writing.