Comments of chapter undefined of The Wielder of Death Magic
The Wielder of Death Magic
Frostysyrup
Chapter comments35
Omfg Do some world building before start throwing out random events. Timeline would probably help too. Sophie only met him a few days ago? How long was main character in the hospital after the evaluation she sent him on where he destroyed a SSS rank creature yet didn't pass? Is that counting from his second time meeting her as he was on his way back to the hospital for 2 days before his trial? He can manipulate people's emotions but can't hold onto enough money to pay for a spare pair of pants? If he manipulated Julius into attacking him he could certainly have managed to pull off some better scams. If he's already managed to master these magic then why does he need to go to magic academy to learn so he can earn money? It's like your writing scenes you thought were cool, then patching them together almost randomly. What a pounding headache
I swear I'll try ... But I just can't anymore, the MC calling such an annoying person "older sister" as if nothing, leave his father's last name after doing everything he has done to "clean" his father's name, his last name being literally the "symbol" by which his father is known, I do not understand anything, the MC looks like the typical "Japanese MC", it is not explained why taking these actions, I really did my best but I simply cannot accept the situations, decisions, attitude and personality of the MC. I personally think you should rewrite the entire novel, Mr. Author. And grammar (writing) doesn't help much (I know I'm not the one to talk about it, but your novel is horribly written)
If you dont like the book or how its wrote then dont read it. Not every book in the world is written explicitly for everyone to understand and have fun with. So either read the book or ST*U and leave. Sure the grammar sucks and the author should space out the condo when different people talk but all this about MC this MC that, just stop. The book isn't yours. The MC, background story, and plots all belong to the writer and this is their passion so let them have fjn and quit bashing people. Because I can garuntee if it was your book you would be crying because of the things people say. Humanity is trash.
He is literally the most brilliant actor. All his actions are fake and he is influencing people so they accept him easily. I think he can't influence people to do big things like "please destroy all thoose who hurt my father", hes ability at least for now is a weak charm and people will fill favorable towards him.
