Comments of chapter undefined of The Wielder of Death Magic

Can't wait for MC's true nature is reveled

Really enjoying the story it has a lot of potential, feel like you might need to work on the dialog a bit, it seems a little forced, and it’s drawn out in a way that people wouldn’t normally do while speaking, still great start👍

Maybe describing the mc's thought while he was being beaten wouldve been better as this just feels confusing

Finally a nice guy mc.... even if he is the heir to Death itself

this chapter was actually rather good

Slicky

Thanks for writing, will definitely continue the story! You’re doing amazing🎉

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This is so just ridiculous like why is the MC such an idiot

xp

again , Wtf is THIS??? If you want to beat the MC ,just make some nice plot.

to cringy cant continue....

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Nice

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

boring mc