Comments of chapter undefined of LEGENDARY GUARDIAN

We all want to be the special one lol ☝️!

His sister gonna have huge talent in magic or some bullcrap

I hope it not gonna be the same cliche and his sister have high magic affinity tbh

Everyone knows life and death are two sides of the same coin. No one has ever assumed they aren't. You can't have either without the other.

Hsec4udz

Yece

Shattered Dreams, the initiation that we all go through

Xp

good novel

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nice beginnings

J

Hmm so that must have been more than just a dream.

Im not really into teenage Protagonists, much less a 14yr old one but let's hope this doesn't become too generic

A lot of work could be done on this to grab attention better. lots of info dumping that could be shown and not told in future chapters. Very little description of the castle and why they start training at 14. over didnt catch my attention. be better about capitalizing too. is it the Holy church, holy Church, or Holy Church?

lol... sorry... I was a bit rusty during the first few chapters of my book

Author, why can’t you just call it a mage class instead of magical?

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