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this was definitely inspired by that novel I forget what it was called something like evil Lord of an intergalactic empire

What talent He just destroyed his fanfic in his first chapter

Loving the story so far. It seems like you have a really good foundation for further plot development. can't wait to see what you write next!

I must say I was seriously interested but one piece nonsense thew everything away author we don't need that op we need some story to kill time

By writing about a goddess who can intervene however she wants, you are creating a "Deus ex machina" that will destroy the coherence and logic of your story. That is to say: The MC is about to win after a thousand chapters where he struggled and suffered, but the goddess comes and loses ... This is why many stories where a ROB or God interferes with character development tend to be abandoned as they become absurd. Eliminate outside meddling that adds nothing to the story.

Wish you wouldnt have started MC off as a child. Please timeskip until adulthood

the beginning it like 'I Am an Evil Lord Yet, Why Are They Happy to Serve Under Me?' good fanfic.

Essence of Grandmaster - okay Grandline - .....doesnnt suit the world that much and gives too many benefits. Essence of King - Should be called Emperor and also needs certain nerfs Essence of Undying Will - Weird name for the benefits following .... I was interested in the novel until this Essence part appeared which kinda makes it stupidly OP beyond reason. Even OPness has limits. The Grandmaster Essence alone is already a good golden spoon for the System in that World.

I can’t wait to read more- OPMC is personally a favourite of mine, so ye

The multiverse thing was uneccasary

This sounds like an amazing story, but it has, I'm going to lose interest, and never finish written it all over it. His ability are too OP, I know you said there are going to be many reincarnators with their own abilities, but even still too OP, which it mainly has to do with you having ROB or Gods interfere in the story which honestly it's a Bad Idea. Personally, I do like what you're doing it's just that when you combine those 2 points together you get a fic that never gets far. I really hope your Interset in this story stays strong because I'm liking it so far.

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Okay why the f did he sign the contract to give his negligent parents money.I mean couldn't he just banish them from coming or something.This is just like what a moron would do.

Thanks for the chapter

I'm here to watch this novel be dropped SO hard

Thanks

Well there is going to be a dragon later in the anime, so we can get to it before the incompetent spear "Hero"

Let's get the rumble rumble fruit

Let's become of the D family