Comments of chapter undefined of Phoenix Phire

Sex with the guard, gotta be done.

First name Glory, last name Hole? :p

A convicted felon, not typical, I like the start. Sex with the guard, bonus points.

Rereading the book since I've caught up. 277 chapters and worth the read.

Nothing like a cold one to start things off.

Where is this sex with the guard part did I skip over that :0

So he is a criminal because he want that the ones that kiled his sister pay?

I like the start Bo.

I love this story so much that I'm re reading it so that I can let the chapters build up.

I like it its not your typical adventure story where the main character is some self righteous douche

This is great. Witty writing. Super

I salute this man

This for the contest Bo? Great start!

Mr. Author did he have a *** with that femal guard, because there nothing like that at all inside this chapter that give this kind of impression.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Different start, I like it.

nice.

Great first chapter, thanks!

Where does it say he had sex with the guard???

This first chapter already has me quite interested