Mcllorycat
I thought the book was well written, the characters were well developed and intersting. The storyline was novel and challenging, you were drawn in to the circle of friends and family as though you were a part of the cast. That said there or two questions i am left with. 1) Aaron was so rich and methodical in both lives why did he never consider hiring a security detail for Keeley especIally in her second life? 2) When Vi injured her leg her mother and father were on a cruise, she called and talked to her mother but never told her about needing surgery on her knee, when they returned all went back to normal, but never discussed her surgery. In the overall scheme of things these may seem like insIgnificant comments but you detailed each character so well that the reader feels like they know what the appropriate reaction would be. If Vi had told them the severity on the injury I would have expected Aaron to have a helicopter to take them from the ship to the airport, to get them home asap. All in all it was a excellent book, and only leaving two questions seems hardly noteworthy, i will definitely read your other books!
I totally love your story it was the best one I've ever read including my own reincarnations stories. the story did touch me in a way I didn't expect having went through the same experience that the Hale children did with their grandfather dying of Alzhimers. I am really glad that I finished the story and am currently rereading it again. your works are amazing