clwnurse
I am a ER/ICU nurse.
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I am new to this site, it lets me read then when i get to a certain part it won’t let me go any further . the first novel i read it would let me continue if i bought coins, which i did then at a certain point it will not let me go any further. So now i have read four books halfway through , i am frustrated not many people want to read four books at the same time or at least i don’t . is there no place for me to go that explains the rules so i know what to do if not i will need to find some place else to read. Can someone please help me?
I am interested in the characters , although at times it seems a little disjointed as it jumps around to different times and places. I am sure the author will eventually pull it all together and it will make perfect sense . You might want to get a different proof reader as there are numerous times he/she or him/her are exchanged, although sometimes it maybe due to the brother and sister’s names being so close. I don’t mean to be so critical as I am enjoying the story line. One last thing, I have had many friends in my life, a couple of BFFs, but never have we fallen all over each other like our two ladies do. I would not be surprised if one or both declared their love for each other. I hope I haven’t offended anyone, if so I apologize .
I thought the book was well written, the characters were well developed and intersting. The storyline was novel and challenging, you were drawn in to the circle of friends and family as though you were a part of the cast. That said there or two questions i am left with. 1) Aaron was so rich and methodical in both lives why did he never consider hiring a security detail for Keeley especIally in her second life? 2) When Vi injured her leg her mother and father were on a cruise, she called and talked to her mother but never told her about needing surgery on her knee, when they returned all went back to normal, but never discussed her surgery. In the overall scheme of things these may seem like insIgnificant comments but you detailed each character so well that the reader feels like they know what the appropriate reaction would be. If Vi had told them the severity on the injury I would have expected Aaron to have a helicopter to take them from the ship to the airport, to get them home asap. All in all it was a excellent book, and only leaving two questions seems hardly noteworthy, i will definitely read your other books!