Mcllorycat
Good to see Aaron making some progress with his love! Enjoying the game between them. Ready to see some additional progress. Maybe some twIsts and the bad guys getting what is due them!
I am really enjoying this. I like how original the story sounds to me and the spin on having both rebirth. I do have a few reservations on the chapters being a little short and unnecessarily split into segmented chapters when they could be longer. Great work. If you published a paper copy I would buy it!:)