I don’t know why Keeley with all the ephiphanies she has had or considered why she hasn’t bothered to ask or have him expand on stuff. Like, common girl, you telling yourself you don’t love him anymore is you lying to yourself. You are angry that it wasn’t so simple of why it fell apart and you know he isn’t emotionless. I like Aaron. XD

She needs to let him tell her from the beginning .

Oh man, I really like how Jennica landed that last resolved statement to Keeley. 😍

I hope he figures out she was reborn so he has a chance to clear the air and explain his choices. 😍

Honestly the past three chapters and I imagine the next could have been combined together to be one. Why are you separating chapters that are covering the same subject still?

Wish the chapters were longer. Looking forward to the next chapter !

I am really enjoying this. I like how original the story sounds to me and the spin on having both rebirth. I do have a few reservations on the chapters being a little short and unnecessarily split into segmented chapters when they could be longer. Great work. If you published a paper copy I would buy it!:)