Comments of chapter undefined of God Of Creation System - FirstBorn

SniperHunter2003

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EmpyriumLv15Empyrium

You have to work on your grammar, sometimes you write thing right and in the next sentence you made it wrong

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SniperHunter2003AuthorSniperHunter2003

Yeah, this was my first fanfic so I was not the best, but I believe that I got way better than I was when I first started writing.

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ahmed_waleed_1200Lv5ahmed_waleed_1200

Thanks for the chapter keep writing and waiting for new chapters to read so keep up and don't drop this story and hope you post soon

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SniperHunter2003AuthorSniperHunter2003

Fuck I got beat again. ~Author out weebs~

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IJUSTWANTREADLv4IJUSTWANTREAD

Thanks for the chapter

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