Comments of chapter undefined of Unfortunate Hero's Retirement Life

There are a lot of grammar mistakes, you should fix them, this is the first chapter, it's where readers decide if they want to keep going.

Grammarly would do wonders for this book

The grammar is quite cringy to be honest. Worst is, the author didn't even bother updating the this chapter. I'll try a few more chapters but if the quality still doesn't improve it means that the author does not care about his / her readers as well.

yo, you wanna fix the grammar? It's terrible. Like dude, reallyz really bad. If this stays like this, I am out.

Sounds like Saint slipped him a Mickey - maybe we should call him Rockspider instead?🕸

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