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Comments of chapter undefined of Stories of Progeny, traveling through worlds

COFFIN_COFFIN
COFFIN_COFFINLv1COFFIN_COFFIN

Isn't nation lottery of british start in 1994?i googled it.Well at least he can do odd jobs in first year and go horse racing or info gathering and info selling ofc i mean like differences in market prices he may need to travel alot but time is on his side.There are definitely better ways to use save and load but you can't fault the man for trying his best in an unkown world without anything

HappyLittleSloth
HappyLittleSlothLv5HappyLittleSloth

If Ron can be considered a great wizard, Harry must be like Merlin. Ron was one of the most useless characters to the point that he is only there to show that while Harry is pathetic he is at least not as bad as Ron. Also the "talent" aspect of the story is a bit weird since you said Dumbledore has like 11-12 talent. were the Founders Four like at 20 talent, with Merlin at 40-50? its a bit confusing since Dumbledore has such low talent if we are going by a 0-100 scale. I feel like the power scaling is just to keep the MC weak so he abuses save/reload to degrade his skills to show that while the MC has a system he is not OP. I feel like the system would of been fine w/o the talent so the MC just works harder to keep up with and then surpass the others, now it just seems like as long as he raises his talent he can slack then force a "character reflection" arc where the MC gets beat down into oblivion and makes him realize he was to arrogant and he should work even harder than before.

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EAA
EAALv7EAA

Thx. Glad he is using lotety at the end!

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jasss22
jasss22Lv14jasss22

Thanks for the chapter.

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Von_Krieg
Von_KriegLv6Von_Krieg

Thanks for the chapter

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DankoLord
DankoLordLv4DankoLord

Why hello there? Exp i take and this fanfic i enjoy.

Ell_LeFant
Ell_LeFantLv11Ell_LeFant

Thanks for the great chapter! 😄

Ahmad_Roshan
Ahmad_RoshanLv1Ahmad_Roshan

It’s “rambling “ and it’s “vent” not “rumbling “ or “went”

Solarious
SolariousLv5Solarious

Not much of a skyrim system. More of a save/load system with other functions with Harry potter style magic 😑

Maple
MapleLv11Maple

What class did he choose ? I am a little worried because I saw no introduction to runes and arithmancy in the skill updates. Don't tell me that he chose the canon classes, this would be ridiculous. More when we know how important knowledge is for him.

Zachariah_Browning
Zachariah_BrowningLv4Zachariah_Browning

He should have stopped at 20 and started on health or stamina

ArgosYesu
ArgosYesuLv15ArgosYesu

The reason we (I) read this is for the plot. It’s not boring plot if you invest time and originality into it and have it shape around an original character... by this time it’s just grind for system levels which is several times more boring than actual plot.

Tibbles
TibblesLv15Tibbles

No power to edit? Find some power sometime and come back then lol

RavenClock
RavenClockLv4RavenClock

What class did he Choose ?! Please don’t say magical creature and divination

musti48
musti48Lv5musti48

xd

amylhia
amylhiaLv5amylhia

Mc stay away from Ron his stupidity is contagious why do you think you don't think of lottery and instead go rob....

kikicrmkia
kikicrmkiaLv13kikicrmkia

Xp

DankoLord
DankoLordLv4DankoLord

What would happen if he after learning the patronus later on using it wandless in shadow creature form?

Ihateusername
IhateusernameLv5Ihateusername

Thanks for chapter!

W3bN0velL0v3r
W3bN0velL0v3rLv5W3bN0velL0v3r

Thanks for the chapter