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Comments of chapter undefined of Prime Originator

RikudoSennin
RikudoSenninLv3RikudoSennin

The quality is degrading chapter by chapter. There are more grammatical mistakes, and the narrative has taken a plunge.

DaoPursuer
DaoPursuerLv14DaoPursuer

How is this guy trustworthy? He literally just backed out of a deal he made with the MC! And the MC is just cool with it and helps him! Does saint mantra force you to be a pushover?

Sauyiro
SauyiroLv15Sauyiro

Till now, not really appealing, good background story like most but the way the narrative is going isn't any good....helping whoever's he see...can trust untrusting people but can't call father or mother to his adopted parents for no reason whatsoever even if you try to explained with the excuse of the "soul is complicated"......

kcorny
kcornyLv4kcorny

Leon is a fucking retard. Revealing him being an alchemist in good faith while aknowledging the fact, that they are in short demand while also knowing the nobles have a bunch of gangs to do their dirty-work. And this guy was supposed to be 30 y.o. at the time he got reincarnated? Did the reincarnation give him some sort of braindamage? Is he autistic? Why is he entering a deal with an untrustworthy guy who can't even be bothered to silence a brat making stupid comments at every point? For answers, read the next chapter of: Prime Retard!

HeavenShakingPalm9
HeavenShakingPalm9Lv5HeavenShakingPalm9

So, when I run into another intelligent being and don't understand what their intemtioms are unless the say it, is that to say I am stupid? I also am unable to read lips. I don't stare at people's lips enough to know that...

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KypTheTyrant
KypTheTyrantLv11KypTheTyrant

Oh ho? Author, do you also cultivate the Divine Single Life Manual?

HK2000
HK2000Lv14HK2000

Annoying girl. I always dislike someone like ger

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Wikih_Weezy
Wikih_WeezyLv1Wikih_Weezy

So he trusts the old geezer more than his own adoptive parents author you are kidding right 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Daoist37
Daoist37Lv5Daoist37

"Helping everyone he see"? People seems to forget he was the son of a Divine Medicine King. "Medicine" as in "doctor", and what does every doctor swears when they start their carer? I don't know the entire thing but i know this "do no harm to anyone". Of course, in a world of cultivation that can't really be corect 'cause of all the fighting and all that BUT seeing a MC that does not expect you to give him your entire treasury + your wife and daughter for a little help is..... refreshing. So yeah, i like this MC and i hope he does not change much in the future.

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TowerClimberLegion
TowerClimberLegionLv3TowerClimberLegion

Hahaha, love the telepatic conversation

dEvillu
dEvilluLv6dEvillu

this deal will only give him low return but will ask everything he has out of it full of trouble

DCKID85
DCKID85Lv13DCKID85

What’s with the coughing thing?

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El_Rasskull
El_RasskullLv4El_Rasskull

[img=recommend] Thanks for the chapter [img=recommend]

Kazuma_Yagami_6556
Kazuma_Yagami_6556Lv11Kazuma_Yagami_6556

Lol the author’s first novel sure start off average or a little below average.

Kate_Keelan
Kate_KeelanLv1Kate_Keelan

liked the story

baniel_stone
baniel_stoneLv4baniel_stone

👎

Freddie_Martinez
Freddie_MartinezLv14Freddie_Martinez

nice

Kuroi234
Kuroi234Lv4Kuroi234

😜😜😜

Tigadua
TigaduaLv3Tigadua

Ythanks

Reaper_210
Reaper_210Lv5Reaper_210

Thanks for the chapter