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Comments of chapter undefined of Birth of the Demonic Sword

Fab_1671
Fab_1671Lv1Fab_1671

I really enjoy this web novel, but I feel I need to mention something that took me out of the immersion in this chapter and some others previously: the description of geology. The way the ground and/or continents are described in the story is like they float on top of the ocean. In the story, when part of a continent is destroyed, it sinks into the ocean. But that's the exact opposite of reality. In reality, the oceans (and all other bodies of water) accumulate on top of solid ground. If you destroy the ground somewhere, it doesn't sink into the ocean – you just unearth more ground underneath, all the way to the core. I thought the author knew this because of the journey to the core, but the descriptions in this chapter of all continents being destroyed leaving only a few islands floating around shows that's not the case. You could make an argument for the new continent since it fell out the sky into the ocean, but you can't for the old continent. Soil doesn't float. You can throw as much soil, rocks, mountains as you like into the ocean, it will sink. EveOfChaos, I hope you will see this and take into consideration. And while I'm at it, another thing that doesn't fit is the time it takes them to fly around. Assuming they fly about as fast as our airplanes, if it takes them weeks or months to travel from place to place, it would mean their world is as large as our Sun! But at least this could potentially be explained by invoking "Breath" and handwaving. But part with the sinking continents cannot. Aside from that, been loving the story and looking forward to what comes next!

Alan_Blewett
Alan_BlewettLv12Alan_Blewett

I've finally caught up with the story and figure it's the perfect time to comment and say it's fantastic, thanks for writing this keep up the good work

cody_dedmon90
cody_dedmon90Lv15cody_dedmon90

yes please I need my fix

FunkyFresh
FunkyFreshLv15FunkyFresh

And this is why noah is going to Rank 7 far faster than expected... just when he thought he could take a nap...

039of_the254
039of_the254Lv11039of_the254

I wonder if he'll actuall kill second prince or something unexpected will occur before that

Joseph_Snyder_3459
Joseph_Snyder_3459Lv13Joseph_Snyder_3459

You know we missed you 🥺, much love!

Ethan_Morgan_9392
Ethan_Morgan_9392Lv15Ethan_Morgan_9392

thanks

AutoChaos
AutoChaosLv13AutoChaos

moreee

Martiner
MartinerLv15Martiner

Yes

M1zuryuu
M1zuryuuLv15M1zuryuu

Yessss

IndraDeus
IndraDeusLv15IndraDeus

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Daoist689978
Daoist689978Lv3Daoist689978

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Shane_Walker00
Shane_Walker00Lv13Shane_Walker00

I wonder if the other royals are still in this world

orriewalls
orriewallsLv15orriewalls

Thanks for the chapter Eve!

Freddy_Lisy
Freddy_LisyLv15Freddy_Lisy

Like how eve asked if we missed hime the answer is yes and thank upy so mich for this story now ill just sit here and enjoy my crack(the new chapters)

Pebel
PebelLv15Pebel

U just scared the shit out of me, no the appointed schedule, with ur consistent earlyer, it felt like a volume stop, and see in one month or so,

Random_Dude_9996
Random_Dude_9996Lv14Random_Dude_9996

Assumed either you or someone close either died or was in some critical condition.

Keith_Stinnette
Keith_StinnetteLv13Keith_Stinnette

we are like c rackheads, we need our daily fix.

Dmart5998
Dmart5998Lv13Dmart5998

I love the book and can't wait to see what is to come. I have been a reader of yours for a long time now and you always find a way to suprise us without destroying the story .

Brendan_Elliott
Brendan_ElliottLv15Brendan_Elliott

We always miss you damn im so excited to see whats to come i need more i need my fiz !

TKR
TKRLv15TKR

"like the new sign i made for you prince?"