Eveofchaos
Loving the story so far. While I did find it late, I gotta say that I'm loving the direction it's going. No cliche mcguffins making the MC a god among men(Just the natural conclusion that his older experienced mind can deal with brutal training regiments and sh*t that an Actual child's couldn't, which gives him a huge head start in developing his abilities). And I appreciate that, while the MC essentially has no morals when it comes to his quest for power, it's not because he is inherently evil or a sociopath. He's a nihilist who during his search for a meaning to his life he realized that as wonderful as ideals and justice are on paper, without power you can't amount to anything. Like I said. He's not Evil, so much as pragmatic and logical to the point of losing his sense of empathy and compassion for those who aren't strong enough to grasp their ideals, themselves.
I really like the story so far... Only caring about his mother and now his master to a certain extent. Keep at it and don't make any changes to Noah's character. I am still waiting for the day Noah kills his dad and reduce the family to ashes. I don't want this to be a weak ass novel where the mother forces the MC to protect the family till his dying breadth as it is still his blood despite the fact that they are treated like ****. Keep up the good work
I personally love the way Noah is developing, and I can totally respect the author's choice for his development. For those who wish to express distaste towards the darker development of the MC you have to remember the glimpse of his previous life. He was killed by gangsters which means he came from a seedy lifestyle to begin with. To expect a character to come from a seedy lifestyle like that to an honorable and pure existence is naive.
There would be no value in this story if you were willing to change it because we complained. I vent simply because some things annoy me however that doesn't mean it's a bad story. The one thing a true writer should follow is this " You write for yourself but if there are people who enjoy and appreciate what you write then that's even better". The most important thing is that you yourself enjoy it.
Oh shittttt! I totally love this story, he reminds me of Fang Yuan from RI. Totally ruthless and scheming not caring about anything in exchange for benefits. Although I think it's morally wrong, but in their world I think that one should be cold and ruthless if they want to survive after all its strong eats the weak world.
"If i can get stronger i will forsake my humanity" Interesting. Seems there is a good chance ill be dropping this LN. Forsaking humanity is no different than becoming a viscous snake and no better than bandits or many of these nobles. Seems this MC will fit right in with that group of scum if this way of thinking continues.