Comments of chapter undefined of The Love of a Lycan

The Love of a Lycan

jikanyotomare

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pixiecaunLv2pixiecaun

I really like the premise of this story. I’m adjusting to the pace. My issue is with your editor. They need to go back through every chapter or you should get an editor that speaks English fluently. There are mistakes that mess with the flow of the story as well as numerous grammatical errors. I am enjoying this book but fixing it would make this a great piece.

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MamaJ1316Lv13MamaJ1316

I agree. The grammatical errors are making it a little difficult to read. Good story so far though.

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ryienneLv4ryienne

💞💞💗...love the way he said his endearment...."my love"....sigh.....love it....

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AlizaAhmed12Lv3AlizaAhmed12

Well I never really read wolf stories cause I hate the mate stuff but I am really liking this story 🤩😋

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RainyDuskNightLv11RainyDuskNight

Torak. The way he called out to her was so loving.

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Nizza_1234Lv4Nizza_1234

My love! LOVE IT!

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Kim_HellardLv1Kim_Hellard

This story has captivated my mind

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Honey_DiamondzLv3Honey_Diamondz

I will go with you to Alpha Torak 🥰

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Barbara_Jones_8896Lv10Barbara_Jones_8896

cool

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Zaira_L_OntiverosLv10Zaira_L_Ontiveros

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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Daoist207304Lv15Daoist207304

❤️

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ThanuNLv10ThanuN

❤️❤️❤️❤️

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DaoistCa49JJLv1DaoistCa49JJ

❤❤❤ this book

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DaoistCa49JJLv1DaoistCa49JJ

❤❤❤ this book!!!!

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Mommy_TinLv12Mommy_Tin

Aghh my heart [img=update]

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Angelice_DamonLv10Angelice_Damon

this is well thought out. I am enjoying it very much. Thank you for sharing your gift with the world!

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Daphne_1763Lv12Daphne_1763

I love this, Only thing is shes 17 so hopefully is smt rly happens With them shell be older

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Deborah_Brewer_5491Lv10Deborah_Brewer_5491

It’s so sad hope she gets to talk

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Stacy_Carter_1490Lv2Stacy_Carter_1490

sniffle, poor baby . losing her family then abandoned by someone she trusted , now an orphanage.

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Lynna_StitesLv13Lynna_Stites

getting better

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Vanessa_Bryant_4409Lv3Vanessa_Bryant_4409

I'm loving it.

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