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Comments of chapter undefined of My Life in Dragon Ball(Complete)

MastersgtJames
MastersgtJamesLv10MastersgtJames

MC's 1st wish shoulda been an ability to travel dimensions or something. So it was not just a one-shot use. While I am not a fan of the 2nd wish (i don't like wishes that are limited in potential) it wasn't completely terrible. The Last wish... Sigh. Why does no one who wishes for a system... specify things so they do not get screwed. SOOO tired of "System novels" where the MC is essentially a super passive beta that is a puppet for the "System" just dancing on command.

Fire_Dragon_3939
Fire_Dragon_3939Lv3Fire_Dragon_3939

by the wait don't he only get 2 wishes

XyaOuss
XyaOussLv4XyaOuss

Was there even a need for the second wish ? The system would be able to provide you with anything you want ?

LuluViBritania
LuluViBritaniaLv14LuluViBritania

he died when he was 11... not even a late **** let alone an ***** yer dropped

swordzero
swordzeroLv6swordzero

instead of doing system you should give something like a guide instead because system are getting overused

Devang98
Devang98Lv6Devang98

Yeah now system will gave him everything make him strongest being in universe.

Da_G0AT
Da_G0ATLv2Da_G0AT

why would he choose a kid???

CrossCounty
CrossCountyLv3CrossCounty

Okay wait..he said the only way to get powers is to lose his ability to swim? But he’s being offered 3 wishes. He can easily as for that effect to not apply to him, get an ability that lets him hop dimensions, etc..and with a system, I bet he can go somewhere else anyway.

World_Atlas
World_AtlasLv5World_Atlas

thanks for the chapter

sylvanas_blizzy
sylvanas_blizzyLv14sylvanas_blizzy

i like one piece so i don't have any for that but i'm a dragon ball fan as well

FALLOUTWander
FALLOUTWanderLv13FALLOUTWander

All the pull in this chapter need to be replaced with pulled it doesn't make sense for god or others to be talking as if they were five. Otherwise not a bad start I'd say.

DeadEye12
DeadEye12Lv15DeadEye12

System controls the mc, it just makes our mc a puppet. I hope you don’t have him to reliant on the system for motivation/plot

FangMing
FangMingLv5FangMing

I like Dragon Ball, in fact it was the first "anime" I saw ... I clarified. Friend if you really saw One Piece you should know that the "only way to be super strong or be the strongest" is not taking a devil fruit, Shanks is a Yonkou and has no devil fruit, only uses Haki and sword techniques (even lacks a hand) Sanji only uses his legs, in addition to the Haki is the Kairoseki. In fact really take a devil fruit can go well and bad, because they have the weakness of seawater (the kairoseki has seawater properties) and the Haki ... Even the shooters are strong ... (Be the case of Usopp's father or himself) without mentioning Koala and his Gyojin Karate.

AhmedAhmed
AhmedAhmedLv3AhmedAhmed

like author ur stupid af

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Good first chapter, good second chapter, good wishes. I like!

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

thanks for the chapter

BigBoiGoneWild
BigBoiGoneWildLv13BigBoiGoneWild

Liking it so far. Keep it up