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Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

Jem_Elle
Jem_ElleLv14Jem_Elle

I like the story so far but I agree that it needs a proper editor. If the one volunteering to check this story’s grammar is willing, I would recommend for the author to let him do so. It is a very interesting plot.

MassiveShlong
MassiveShlongLv13MassiveShlong

I feel like everyone is being harsh on the author grammar, but please understand it's obviously not the author's first language, and not everybody has the means to hire an editor. Us readers can still comprehend the story, so let's enjoy it as it is. 😊

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sasunaru1827
sasunaru1827Lv10sasunaru1827

This looks interesting but it just needs a bit of editing .

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Dallya_1
Dallya_1Lv2Dallya_1

Why are some people so mean about the author's grammar ? The author clearly precises from the beginning that he didn't know about the language neither do i . And it's clearly readable for anyone to understand . Dear Author i really appreciate how you didn't give up on this story because of some people giving you discouragement [img=gift][img=recommend]

Blizter_Bae
Blizter_BaeLv3Blizter_Bae

It feel like the grammar keep getting worse after each chapter, cus chapter 1 and two weren't as bad as this

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LunaChopper
LunaChopperLv14LunaChopper

It is getting interesting. More please 🥺🥺.

splashofham
splashofhamLv4splashofham

Do you know what I think would be really refreshing if in one of these reborn revenge novels the mc just immediately starts the revenge, like right of the bat, they just torture them straight away, or string them along in their basement for the rest of their lives... just what I've been thinking ... Too cold blooded ??

Xie
XieLv12Xie

Please work on your sentences and grammar.

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Raifis
RaifisLv10Raifis

It is good but how many chapters will you be uploading/ week?

DaoistRinPim
DaoistRinPimLv15DaoistRinPim

Actually, the grammar is better than a lot of stories I've read.

DaoistESSy4t
DaoistESSy4tLv1DaoistESSy4t

cool, since this is your first trial, writing in foreign language, more strength to your elbows

blade_123
blade_123Lv10blade_123

it's really great and interesting. keep it up.

Daoistr1SOA8
Daoistr1SOA8Lv1Daoistr1SOA8

good, keep trying it best

Dustin_Jones_7974
Dustin_Jones_7974Lv15Dustin_Jones_7974

Love it, I've already restarted twice

Nilfa_Dsouza
Nilfa_DsouzaLv1Nilfa_Dsouza

interesting

Mapig_Pg
Mapig_PgLv1Mapig_Pg

is fantastic

Johalove22
Johalove22Lv2Johalove22

Pues recién empiezo la lectura, hasta ahora interesante.

Me_Ena
Me_EnaLv2Me_Ena

Thanks for the update 🍀🍀🍀💕

Kingg_11
Kingg_11Lv5Kingg_11

yeahh

Me_Ena
Me_EnaLv2Me_Ena

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