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Comments of chapter undefined of Netori System [Original]

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Venooos_Geming
Venooos_GemingLv2Venooos_Geming

Im gonna call it he dead

Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5Legendary_Person

I don't like arrogant M.C ,make him cold ,calm and intellectual........Just my thoughts.

DDDDgold
DDDDgoldLv4DDDDgold

moral mc moron + bad english; dropped

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Kazumayagami
KazumayagamiLv14Kazumayagami

Rias better be harem 😍

Kazumayagami
KazumayagamiLv14Kazumayagami

Same like over-geared system mc gets strong he should of just been betrayed in chapter one then gets his system then start getting revenge no need for to wait a few chapters before that. 😭

MoonBaka
MoonBakaLv5MoonBaka

I think i read this in other novel

Cheeky_Monkey
Cheeky_MonkeyLv4Cheeky_Monkey

this seems veryyyy similar to the start of the overgeared system...

Kiera_Kowaliw
Kiera_KowaliwLv14Kiera_Kowaliw

How many stories have you written and you still can’t get the grammar right? It looks like a 4th grader was trying to write smut.

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Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv14Alanray64

Good start so far 👍

GhostyXXX
GhostyXXXAuthorGhostyXXX

Rias-https://ww w.pinterest.dk/pin/728668414681600895/ https://ww w.pinterest.com.mx/pin/774830310861755811/ Asura- Is the girl in the cover art/(Spoiler on the pic) Sera-https://ww w.reddit.com/r/DarlingInTheFranxx/comments/af29yu/zero_two_by_nopeys/ Let me know if the links don't work since webnovel is shi.t and can't let pics go up.

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just_let_me_read
just_let_me_readLv1just_let_me_read

why?

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ChaMy
ChaMyLv4ChaMy

SĂł dale...

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Ladylustful12
Ladylustful12Lv10Ladylustful12

oh yeah

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Ladylustful12
Ladylustful12Lv10Ladylustful12

Rias??

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DemonKing_Oda
DemonKing_OdaLv10DemonKing_Oda

Hey Author, I got a question. Why is there two books about this? Who is this ghostxxx???

fearlessj2008
fearlessj2008Lv14fearlessj2008

so confused on if she is betraying him right now or if they are doing that to get his sister to leave him.

lmpossible
lmpossibleLv3lmpossible

**** bro the first line is already retarded

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

I get the anger but hes an asshole to even his sister who actually care about him. I assumed Rias was playing him as a gag with Silver because if the obvious setup and the fact he again acts like a jackass. Nothing about him to appeal to her, even during the date his smirking and acting like a prick.

Lulu_Gift_8498
Lulu_Gift_8498Lv3Lulu_Gift_8498

Just too arrogant🙄🙄