Mcllorycat
I really think you need to push to get published... I have now read several of your books (well at least started them lol. I will finish them all eventually, I am just so intrigued by all the story lines) and the fact that you have such a good way of building your characters and story lines in so many different genres is really amazing and impressive. Like you are an endless supply of creative writing. I really love your style of writing as well. It allows me to picture it as if I am watching a movie or show. You really should find a publisher who has experience and wants someone like you who will just let you have creative reign as long as you push out books like all of the ones you have published on here. Obviously you would want to format the chapters differently to be longer, but other than that I wouldn't change a thing. I could even see illustrations every couple pages being kind of cool addition but definitely not necessary.