Comments of chapter undefined of Can I Have Simple Daily Life? Maybe Next Time (fanfic konosuba)

If it's help you could use grammarly to fix your grammar

Jeez this is hardly readable when its unedited?

Its been a while since I've seen Konosuba so I have no idea if those stats are good (I'm guessing they are). Also, what is the "Mobile" stat for?

the grammer

Yunyun..hahaha

How is this the edited version

aww thats so fluff and cute hoe come i never payed much attention to yun and why tf did ur grammar die after half the chapter man dont bail out on me like this

Does this system come from reincarnation? It is possible that he has activated late because he had not met the conditions, it is very unlikely that the gods offer a system, joining a system with something that the protagonist believes can make him a god, it seems that our mc will really be OP, nice

The first couple of chapters weren't bad grammar wise but then it suddenly became worse this chapter. You should probably use an app to help with the corrections. Keep trying and continue bettering yourself.

Solo pagas con oro ? Y que pasa con el cobre y la plata

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter

Can you fix the grammar, because u have good story and i enjoy it

Thanks for the chapter

i meant to mention this before but is there a time difference between there deaths because he died right after so how is it so far in the story by a couple days or more already.

His broken skill with the "Learning ability" wasn't mentioned on his card

Thanks

Kill me for the grammar even my sh1tty novel is readable

I just check it... and we had a same problem.... Awfull Grammar.........