Comments of chapter undefined of Omni-Mastery
Omni-Mastery
LightningAsura
Chapter comments24
Kinda lazy writing, author doesn't finish words on a consistent basis. Started off great, but steadily became lazy ex: "notif" instead of "notifications" or when listing quests just cutting off in the middle of the quest title without typing the rest of the word. It's okay if it doesn't happen every paragraph, but come on dude.
The sentence ' I also made a simple spear for combats when I need to reach far for , and a bow for long range.' should be changed to 'I also made a simple spear for combat when I need to reach far and a bow for long range." Combat doesn't need an 's' on the end. And doesn't need a comma before it because you're only listing two things, you would use the comma if you were listing three or more things. Also the 'for' after far is redundant. Thank you for a great story so far.
