Comments of chapter undefined of The Way of the Sword (BL)

This may be a bit late, but: The world building seems nice till now, with the problem being that you're providing far too much information at once, meaning that almost no one can remember the details of grades and levels. Another thing that I personally hope for, but once again, this may come bit late, is that the whole killing of innocent being just for the sake of growing stronger stops happening. It's quite disheartening and to be honest, just plain murder. People who do that, no matter with which justification, are evil.

All the info is a little hard to remember but i do like this book please keep writing

Hi Take- the moon new reader here Love the pace of the novel and really appreciate your efforts

Hello people! I will not even ask for the patience to read, after all, I do not think the story is bad. Unlike my other stories, I am creating this world carefully. Anyway, I'm waiting for some feedback. Xoxo

Thanks for the chapter! And please don't let the story die! I will always be your reader! \(^~^)/

Thanks for the chapter! 😘😘😍

Good so far

This story is so fun!! I'm really liking and feel taken in by the MC. Thanks for writing this chapter and continuing this novel!!

Sorry author-san! I just discovered your book now and don't worry I will vote and comment every day 😊 I'm a huge fan of BL novels and so far your book facinates me. Keep up the good work!

Another interesting chapter. I'd like to re-read it once it's edited.

The information are a bit too much now :( but the story is interesting.

Can I say something? I think your story is very interesting and if you don't win the contest and you don't have many readers please continue on writing this fantastic book I just dread it and admire you and never give up whatever happens if you surrender you won't succeed in believing in you and you Believe in you.

Look I’m going to make it clear here I wasn’t making fun of you or saying your novel was a waste of time what I was trying to do was provide feedback. There aren’t enough BL novels on quidain and I was so excited when your book came up for me that I immediately started reading it. I’ve studied creative writing for 3 years in college and it’s because I know what goes into creating such a work that I get frustrated. I just wanted you to get the most recognition possible for your work and not be held back by editing and grammar. Plus I don’t know you. I don’t know if English is your first, second or third language and at no point did I question wether you could speak or write it so I don’t know where the questions on English classes came up. The translation remark was based on my own readings of Baidu translations not saying you were using it. Ah, in short I wasn’t trying to trigger you or insult you I just wanted better for you and your characters and hadn’t thought I would get dismissed for it. I was really looking forward to reading the rest of your book.

I think you should edit your work before posting it’s fine to upload a chapter that is quoted as not edited but you clearly spent time and energy coming up with your characters and world setting so wouldn’t you want to present it in the best form possible? Some of these sentences are very rough reading like MTL in places I would suggest stopping and going over what you have done cause while it may be too late for older readers it would provide a fresh start for new readers

Take a bit time to read because the membership, coins and points...I'm trying to catch it 👍👍👍👍

Never mind, my need for the MC to be OP has been temporarily fulfilled. Thank you, author. Please continue to write!

So far I really like it. It is nice that the MC have all the goodies right from the start and seems like a good person. But all the grades are a bit confusing and to much information and seems a bit hard to remember. But MC and ML meeting so early is God sent i like it and will support you. I hope you can edit the chapters to.

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